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Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Hot writing story\ Stage Drama!

CRASH!! I was on the floor, could this night get any worse? CRASH!! Yes it could. Oh no everyone's staring at me. Oh man, my cousin is laughing at me. "Run off stage" said a little voice in my head, but no, I'm rooted to the spot, blushing like mad, scared out of my wits.
But then it got much, much worse, because as I struggled to my feet and started to get off stage, my scooter I was riding on turned into a MONSTER!! It twisted around making my foot lose a lot of skin, I jumped back and my shoe skidded across the floor, I didn't care about the pain I just wanted to get out of there FAST! I grabbed my scooter and ran off stage.
I started crying so my friend bravely went on stage and grabbed my shoe. I was so grateful I couldn't speak. That night was the most horrifiyng night in my life . I never want to go through it again...EVER!!

3 comments:

  1. Super writing! I was able to make a picture in my head as I read your story!

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  2. I enjoyed reading your story India! Lots of pictures went through my head as I read it. :)

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  3. Great story India, I like the way you took a true story and added some pieces for dramatic effect

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