India you have made a fantastic job of writing a spooky story. You went to a lot of effort to survey your class about characters, language and types of stories. The detail you have included in your story keeps the reader interested right until the end. You have made an excellent job of podcasting it, by using expression and inflection in your voice. I hope you are able to have your story broadcast on the school radio station.
Pania
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